Reflection of Final Draft

Yanna Sanchez

Ms. Nargiza Matyakuboya

English 21003. Section M

28 November 2017

Reflection of Final Draft

Passionate

            Often times with the many papers I have written this semester I have been able to research and collect information, then plan execution of said information, however with this assignment I felt that there was too much information and I would not be able to get my point across.  I usually over think assignments and my topics, but for this topic I was so sure that this is what I wanted to research.  I became so curious about this topic after reading from prison to PhD, I could not understand why a mother could be abused and then turn around and abuse her own child and eventually killed him.  I needed to understand what makes someone become this way, and how could we change this vicious cycle of ignorance, abuse, and violence.  Therefore, it was clear to me that this controversy is so important to many of the issues going on today, and if clarity could be gained everyone could benefit.

            This topic was very interesting and I am sure my audience would appreciate the valuable insight on this major controversy.  When composing this paper, it was difficult to plan the execution of the information, because human behavior is anything but easy.  Trying to explain basic information or fundamental theories behind psychology requires lengthy explanations, and I did not want to bore my readers.  Therefore, I only included absolute necessary information and got straight to the point.  I do truly believe that if psychologists continue to study this concept and perform further studies the world could benefit from the findings and become a better place.